Robbie you have done and awesome job retelling the story of Melepaea. I like that you have included lots of detail. In the future you might see how succinct (short but clear) you can be in your writing. I also like that you are so proud of your name. Do you know why your parents choose that name for you? Keep up the great blogging from Mrs Carruthers.
Kia ora Robbie. My name is Phil and I'm a teacher in the Ako Hiko cluster of school sin Auckland. I enjoyed your detailed retell of the story. I also like my name and it's special for me because it was my grandfather's middle name. Keep up the awesome blogging!
Robbie you have done and awesome job retelling the story of Melepaea. I like that you have included lots of detail. In the future you might see how succinct (short but clear) you can be in your writing.
ReplyDeleteI also like that you are so proud of your name. Do you know why your parents choose that name for you?
Keep up the great blogging from Mrs Carruthers.
Kia ora Robbie. My name is Phil and I'm a teacher in the Ako Hiko cluster of school sin Auckland. I enjoyed your detailed retell of the story. I also like my name and it's special for me because it was my grandfather's middle name. Keep up the awesome blogging!
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